You have made a solid start here and you have covered everything necessary to pass. I would like you to clarify a few of your definitions as some are a little off (manipulation of diegetic time and space) and some could do with more defining before you give the example. Go through the post and check what you can clarify and elaborate on. Also, please be sure to explain your examples and say why they are particularly well-chosen. For example, your eye-line match cuts and motivated edit section is a little unclear.
Dan,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a solid start here and you have covered everything necessary to pass. I would like you to clarify a few of your definitions as some are a little off (manipulation of diegetic time and space) and some could do with more defining before you give the example. Go through the post and check what you can clarify and elaborate on. Also, please be sure to explain your examples and say why they are particularly well-chosen. For example, your eye-line match cuts and motivated edit section is a little unclear.
Ellie
Much better - well done.
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