The use of prezi is nice (and I'm glad you like using it - prezi's great!) You have made a good start here but there are two things you need to do: 1. proof read your work, it is littered with typos and little mistakes that should not be there 2. add as much detail as you can both to explain what should be done and then also WHY we do it. This can certainly be done on each of your slides.
You have a good frame to work from here, just pad it out now.
Dan,
ReplyDeleteThe use of prezi is nice (and I'm glad you like using it - prezi's great!) You have made a good start here but there are two things you need to do:
1. proof read your work, it is littered with typos and little mistakes that should not be there
2. add as much detail as you can both to explain what should be done and then also WHY we do it. This can certainly be done on each of your slides.
You have a good frame to work from here, just pad it out now.
Ellie
Very good - well done.
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