You have made a good start here - you just need to get into the habit of checking your work; there are quite a few typos and mistakes throughout and your bit on camera operators is a bit strange in the middle. The content is good however and you have sourced your info which is good to see. You could add a little more on useful courses to take at the end if you wanted to.
Dan,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here - you just need to get into the habit of checking your work; there are quite a few typos and mistakes throughout and your bit on camera operators is a bit strange in the middle. The content is good however and you have sourced your info which is good to see. You could add a little more on useful courses to take at the end if you wanted to.
Ellie